NapkinDictator's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vappy Birthday - Outfit Swap!]

I suppose I should rate these three pokemon individually since they don't seem to be super connected in this piece

The purple tailed one on the left looks cute, I like the portrayed emotion and energetic sitting
4/5

The braixen in the middle feels off somehow. It's likely the face, the perspective feels wrong. Otherwise, solidly drawn
3/5

The posing, expression, and bits of gold fit the vaporeon on the right so well! Your art-style works perfectly for that sass and sharp energy
5/5

So, averaging it out, 4/5. Good job

Braixzen responds:

Hey, Thanks a lot for your feedback, Napkin! Highly appreciated ^v^

I think I could've explained this a bit better if I managed the panels or the actions a bit differently, but it definitely might seem weird for outsiders who don't know the two characters very well ^^;

So, as I said, there are only 2 OC characters, the Vaporeon and the Braixen (the latter which has two different outfits).
1st-panel shows the Vaporeon using the Braixen's default/casual outfit;
2nd-panel shows the Braixen using the Vaporeons outfit (which is just the collar and the tail roughly-painted-over;
3rd-panel shows the Vaporeon using the Braixen's secondary outfit (along with the Braixen-in-question and two other friends watching in awe in the corner);

I definitely learned a lot while doing this and if I ever have more ideas similar to this, I'd approach them a bit differently :3

Thankies again for the review! 💛